Tutorial with Dean Hughes August 2nd.

We discussed how I know things have worked or are finished. We talked about the suitcase piece and how everything in that work is necessary and there is good balance. In some of the works, at this point, I had just put things together quickly to get a sense of them in an experiemental way, so they were unresolved. I need to make sure everything about the final work is relevant and important, particularly in using found objects and materials as some parts of these may need to be removed or adjusted. Dean also mentioned the works needed more punctuation, more things that related, like an echo. For instance with the domestic piece with the cake, perhaps I could use the chalks in the cake to draw with on another area of the work. This would link the piece together more. We also discussed artists: Franz West, Rachel Harrison..